The breaking of iron

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I am a strong independent woman,

They say, but I do have my own doubts.

You are built of iron, but does it never break?

 

You are self-sufficient,

You don’t need anyone,

But how can I be my own doppelganger?

 

You are a confident woman

They say, but I do have my reservations,

For deep down I am shattering bit by bit

The iron has been hit too hard,

It’s moulding and remoulding,

Losing all its true essence.


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16 responses to “The breaking of iron”

  1. wishes.spardha Avatar

    B’ful and very true..

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you dear.

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  2. thewritewomanblog Avatar

    So very true and very well expressed, Moushmi!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks a ton dear. I truly appreciate your reading and sharing your thoughts.

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  3. Andrei Avatar

    Even the toughest iron there is can only take too much heat and pounding.
    Truthful and beautifully expressed, Moushmi.

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks a lot for appreciating my novice work, it makes me feel over-joyed.

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      1. Andrei Avatar

        Don’t mention it. It’s beautiful as it is truthful. I love it ☺

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  4. shehannemoore Avatar

    Love the way you use the idea of iron. Nice work xxx

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so much dear for leaving behind your wonderful words.
      I am glad you liked it.

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      1. shehannemoore Avatar

        Thank YOU for posting such a true piece of work xxxx

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        The pleasure is all mine.

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  5. buddy71 Avatar

    i hope you read your own words and believe them

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      I will try.

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  6. The Showers of Blessing Avatar

    Very well written. You seem to know yourself and not to lose perspective by others compliments. Good writing. Thank you for stopping by. Please come back soon.

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so much for the appreciation and I sure will visit soon.

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      1. The Showers of Blessing Avatar

        You’re welcome. See you around!!

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