Challenge Accepted..!!

Published by

on

Something from a very confused and a very aggressive me.

Moushmi Radhanpara's avatarMoushmi Radhanpara

I see a girl standing erect, head high, hair open, long and roughly combed.  She has gripped her sides of the dress tightly, way too tightly. Her toes are clinching the floor, scratching it. Her hair hides the corner of her face.

cb7088e9aad2f80eb93b882a68faf2e2

She is fair, a small mark on her right cheek, though not visible. But her fair skin is turning pink and slowly red; red with anger, red with rage.

She has a fluffy and sharp eyebrow. Just as it was suppose to be, giving her eyes a beautiful and lustrous look. Her eyes, big and wide, hazel brown in color; cute yet cunning, bold yet beautiful, shy yet audacious, talkative and yet tight lipped.

Her eyes speak a lot; tells me about her anger, about her grief. Slowly her eyes too have only one color and that is red. I see controlled tears in her eyes now.

She…

View original post 257 more words


Discover more from Moushmi Radhanpara

Subscribe to get the latest posts sent to your email.

23 responses to “Challenge Accepted..!!”

  1. Fab Writings Avatar

    Oh, but the tone in your writing really reflects the inner conflict inside you at that time regarding the issue of inequality.
    But we all are making efforts to sort ourselves out, because that’s the first step of sorting out the problems that lie outside us, by solving problems within us first.

    Like

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much for reading it and leaving behind this warming comment. I really appreciate it.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Fab Writings Avatar

        All my pleasure. 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Winnie Avatar

    Great writing!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much Winnie.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Winnie Avatar

        You’re welcome!

        Liked by 1 person

  3. iScriblr Avatar

    Honest and raw! Loved it!❤️❤️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Richa.

      Liked by 1 person

  4. bereavedandbeingasingleparent Avatar

    So well written. Really good.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much.

      Like

  5. Megala Avatar

    Sure, she will win the challenge!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Megala.

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Anupriya K Avatar

    “One, that will not understand her. Two, with whom she cannot share everything, and three, with whom she wants to share everything but they are unavailable for her.”

    This line touched me❤️ I loved this post, Moushmi. Absolutely loved it

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful thoughts about my piece 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Anupriya K Avatar

        You’re most welcome ❤️

        Liked by 1 person

  7. rajanisingh885721172 Avatar

    Fabulous post

    Like

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you 🙂

      Like

  8. rajanisingh885721172 Avatar

    Please read my first post

    Like

  9. ilonapulianauskaite Avatar
    ilonapulianauskaite

    LOVED the writing, have a super weekend, yaaay!!!!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks a lot dear.

      Like

  10. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

    This is a brilliant piece – the way described her angst, her frustration is so well put. And the three kind of people was ❤️ – and for the PS – Damn the society, damn the men – let her soar, let her fly, let her love

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much Shantanu. You are just too kind.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

        you are so very welcome

        Liked by 1 person

Leave a reply to Fab Writings Cancel reply

Previous Post
Next Post

Discover more from Moushmi Radhanpara

Subscribe now to keep reading and get access to the full archive.

Continue reading