The Betraying Eyes.

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Walking down that lane

An identical cup of coffee in hand,

Her captivating smell brushed my senses

And I just fell in love.

 

A crop top and a snuggish denim skirt

Defining unpretentiously her grimacing smirk.

Hair curly and wild, and on her feet some ragged sneakers

Elucidating the most mundane, screaming through her sharp features.

 

Kohl smeared and black smoldering eyes

Screeching the unknown and the hidden lies,

Oh, what with the black luscious lips

Without any trace of a smile, makes my heart flip.

 

The rage, the hatred, the agony quite visible

All making her to me, surprisingly irresistible,

Her secrets, her valor, her daunting self

Making me feel like a fustian elf.

 

She didn’t win me over with her mysterious meander

I melted into a glaze, by her dark loathful candor.

I stood there; fiery; lost; engulfed

And just like that I fell in love.

 

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34 responses to “The Betraying Eyes.”

  1. Laiba Tanveer Avatar

    ahh, so beautiful.

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks.

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  2. Anupriya K Avatar

    A beautiful journey of falling in love. Wow ❤

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks,

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  3. Deboshree Avatar

    This was really dreamy.

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Deboshree.

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  4. adiscardedplant Avatar

    I flowed down in a smoothly flowing waterfall. A great painting!! 🙂

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much.

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      1. adiscardedplant Avatar

        You are welcome!! 🙂

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  5. myexpressionofthoughtsblog Avatar

    Beautiful journey shared Moushumi

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks.

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  6. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

    The perfect way to fall in love – write the girl side of the story now

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      I tried, but I am pretty sure, it’s not up to the mark!
      You portray the ‘she’ beyond any words.

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      1. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

        I am sure it is beautiful. Why don’t you post it. Thanks you for always saying beautiful words

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        I just did!

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      3. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

        Cool let me check

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      4. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Hah! I am already nervous! What if my report card says ‘fail’ :-p

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      5. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

        I just commented

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  7. Adi Avatar

    What a flow in the arc of the story- just like that i fell in love with your poetry!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Hahaha thanks Aditi.

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  8. Prakash Hegade Avatar

    All those little things, they rooted love! Nice one. 🙂

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks.

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  9. Sakshi Avatar

    Oh this is so beautiful

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Sakshi. 🙂

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      1. Sakshi Avatar

        My pleasure

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  10. indianeskitchen Avatar

    How beautiful!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you.

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