सूरज से गुफ्तगू #11

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सुन, तू कब से काबिल हो गया यु गम छुपाने में
तू कब से यु हिचकिचाने लगा खुल के मुस्कराने में
कोई पुरानी छूटी हुई ख़ुशी याद आयी है
या बस मुझसे दूर जाने की रुस्वाई है?

कुछ और गुफ्तगू: सूरज से गुफ्तगू #10

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  1. Accidental Blogger Avatar
    Accidental Blogger

    ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      😀

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  2. Samyak Singh Avatar
    Samyak Singh

    Just the 2 options? None of the above should be there too!😅

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Then what should be there?

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      1. Samyak Singh Avatar
        Samyak Singh

        “To make you want him more” maybe or “None of the above”.

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Why not make him want me, for a change!

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      3. Samyak Singh Avatar
        Samyak Singh

        Depends on how long you can hold your patience!

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      4. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Uuurrrghhhh

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      5. Samyak Singh Avatar
        Samyak Singh

        😃

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  3. buddy71 Avatar
    buddy71

    🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬…for not being able to read it.

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Hahaha, I am so sorry Buddy! I hate to do this to someone who is one of my oldest blogging friends. And by oldest I mean someone whom I know, since I started blogging. 😀

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        buddy71

        😩😩

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  4. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar
    boundlessblessingsblog

    Why is the poor sun hiding from u, Moushmi it is always shining bright only when the rain clouds come it simply does not show it’s light. Nice poetry

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much Kamal.

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      1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar
        boundlessblessingsblog

        welcome Moushmi.

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        😀

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      3. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar
        boundlessblessingsblog

        😊😊😊😊

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  5. DeepikasRamblings Avatar
    DeepikasRamblings

    Badiya likha hai. 👌

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you.

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  6. The Typewriter Avatar
    The Typewriter

    Waah.. Too good.. 😇💕

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks.

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      1. The Typewriter Avatar
        The Typewriter

        Pleasure here dear.. 😇

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  7. radhikasreflection Avatar
    radhikasreflection

    Interesting perspective Moushumi!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Radhika.

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  8. Geet Avatar
    Geet

    beautiful pictures and words…

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much.

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      1. Geet Avatar
        Geet

        Most welcome…

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  9. paeansunplugged Avatar
    paeansunplugged

    Very interesting!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks.

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      1. paeansunplugged Avatar
        paeansunplugged

        My pleasure!

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  10. Yasmin Khan Avatar
    Yasmin Khan

    Niice❤️👏

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Yasmin ji, I know I can never write remotely as brilliant as you. Still, one must try!

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      1. Yasmin Khan Avatar
        Yasmin Khan

        Arey,you write beautifully dear!
        I love your work ❤️❤️❤️

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        And I love you 😀

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