Perfectly Imperfect

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Black or brown, it doesn’t matter, they were beautiful. I couldn’t make out the colour of her eyes but I know they were stunning, mesmerising, for sure, as I am still lost in that glimpse of her gaze. They seemed innocent, yet they had a story. What did they want to say? What was she hiding?

Her eyes were big, bold and yet they seemed shy and diffident. What was wrong? I did not know, though I wanted to. She had looked at me with those mysterious eyes and had left me dazed. The look was striking with the arched eyebrows raised high above on her forehead. Was she confused or rather questioning?

I am pretty sure she could have scared off anyone with those deep eyes; well she could have startled herself too with those meaningful eyes.

They weren’t perfect, neither the eyes nor the eyebrows but they were beautiful to me, perfectly imperfect, just for me.

PS: A fiction.


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49 responses to “Perfectly Imperfect”

  1. Mary Brearley Avatar

    Very strong. The description speaks volumes!

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so very much dear.
      I am glad to hear positive opinions on my writing.

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  2. houstonphotojourney Avatar

    Whoa that was INCREDIBLE I totally saw those eyes in my mind (a signature for me of great writing!). I’m a total eye person as I do believe they are the window to your soul! Keep on writing!!!!

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so much I really appreciate your kind words.
      Overjoyed!
      Glad that you could see thoe eyes, a sign that my writing was able to describe what i wanted to.

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      1. houstonphotojourney Avatar

        You sure did it justice!!!

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        Moushmi Radhanpara

        🙂

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  3. Prakash Hegade Avatar

    Every Eye moment and blink has a story. Nicely expressed.. 🙂

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so much for the appreciation.

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  4. Brainy Versatility Avatar

    Reblogged this on Brainy Versatility.

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so much dear, I truly appreciate this.

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  5. Akhila Avatar

    Eyes are always meaningful.. Isn’t it..

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Yes, they say a lot that is unsaid.

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  6. iamthatgirl23 Avatar

    Beautiful post

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  7. iamthatgirl23 Avatar

    Beautiful post.

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so much dear.

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  8. M. Miles Avatar

    You had me at “black or brown!” My husband has eyes just like that–although his eyes diverge from the rest of the story.

    It’s funny how dark colored eyes reflect more light, isn’t it?

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      yes, they are just unique in their own way, with their own particular charm, isn’t it?

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks for the re blog dear.
      I truly appreciate it.

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