Den. Ben. 10

Published by

on

Many years had passed when,

I found myself living in a troubled den,

It was surely a troubled den-

For it seemed that there I had passed years 10.

I cried and cried, I tried to complain to Ben,

But no fruitful aid could he provide me then.

This my situation was, my dear Ken,

And I could not overcome it even in 10.

I cried and cried

I tried and tried to talk to Ben,

But time was unfortunate for me

And nothing could happen then.

Disturbed as I was, to soothe myself I took a pen,

Comfort was not meant for me,

Even after scribbling on pages 10.

And yet many more years had passed when,

I was still living in the troubled den. !

PS: This is a small piece that I wrote really a long time ago, probably during my younger school days. I don’t know if it makes sense to you, let me know on the comments below.


Discover more from Moushmi Radhanpara

Subscribe to get the latest posts sent to your email.

35 responses to “Den. Ben. 10”

  1. drkapadiad Avatar

    I guess its too personal.. difficult to understand out of context..
    but all i can understand..
    u r no longer in that den ..
    U hv got more way to use ur pen ..
    now u don’t cry don’t cry every now n then ..
    Its a thing of past when u scribbled pages 10
    Now sky is Limit ,, when u hv ur pen .. u don’t need any ben or ken 😃👍

    Liked by 2 people

    1. kalyansparks Avatar

      Many bloggers hear started writing poetry from younger School days,comparing to them I am a kid.Actually I discovered writer in me when I started flirting with girl in chats😝😝..Soo you guys are like really seniors for me .regarding this.. At that young age you did a very decent job..👏👏👏👏👏

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Thanks,
        But what is it with you and flirting, anyways?

        Liked by 1 person

      2. kalyansparks Avatar

        I don’t know…I find it fun…😝😝😝😝😝..anyway I can’t do that in real life ..I only do with strangers while chatting..for example bloggers like you

        Liked by 1 person

      3. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Lol!

        Liked by 1 person

      4. kalyansparks Avatar

        Yeah….moushmi…

        Liked by 1 person

    2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Hahahahah
      I loved this reply.
      Thanks a lot dear for giving me this appreciation and for the support to my novice writings.
      Much love,
      Have a good day.

      Liked by 1 person

  2. drkapadiad Avatar

    Sky is the limit *

    Like

  3. drkapadiad Avatar

    Ways *

    Liked by 1 person

  4. kalyansparks Avatar

    Hahah..exactly..when you have pen..what’s the need of ben

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks dear, I truly appreciate the support.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. kalyansparks Avatar

        YOU are always welcome moushmi..how are you???

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        I am good.
        How have you been?

        Liked by 1 person

      3. kalyansparks Avatar

        Maybe not as pretty as you😝

        Liked by 1 person

      4. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Kuch bhi…

        Liked by 1 person

      5. kalyansparks Avatar

        YOU are always welcome moushmi..by the way how are you????

        Liked by 1 person

  5. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

    Deep and poignant words Moushmi. Great poem so well composed

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks a lot dear.
      I am glad it touched you in some small way.
      Much love.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

        Yes absolutely Moushmi. Love and hugs to you to dear.

        Liked by 1 person

  6. Anjana Avatar

    Wow!! this is truly amazing, Moushmi 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so much dear.
      I am glad you liked it and seemed fit enough to appreciate it.

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Sifar Avatar

    Nice!…you have it still preserved! 👍

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks a lot for the support dear.

      Liked by 1 person

  8. houstonphotojourney Avatar

    I’d be curious to know. Did you finish 10th grade with struggles going on?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Yes, when I was giving my 10th, there were a lot family issues going on to which no one seemed to care. I was more of a loner back then but no one had any idea what actually disturbed me, even at home people thought that these things do not affect me in any way, but they did and it changed a lot in me.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. houstonphotojourney Avatar

        I was a very quite person until after I had my first child too. I think often times when you are a relatively quite person people tend to not think you ever get upset.

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Yes, that is the accepted theory, I guess.

        Liked by 1 person

  9. Puneet Avatar

    A beautiful poem. I guess different people can relate to this poem in different contexts.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks a lot for stopping by dear.
      I ma glad you could relate to it.
      PS: Where and how have you been?

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Puneet Avatar

        Welcome. I’m fine. Was just busy with life and ending graduation.

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        So you graduated?
        What net? Planning for masters?

        Liked by 1 person

      3. Puneet Avatar

        Just gave the last exams. Now waiting for results. Next… Hmm.. Searching for a job.

        Liked by 1 person

      4. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Don’t want to do masters?

        Liked by 1 person

      5. Puneet Avatar

        Right now. Nope. Tired of the continuous 4 years study having given 50 exams 😤😤😤
        Maybe after an year, I will do so.

        Liked by 1 person

      6. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Ok ook.
        Think of it. Till then enjoy your life.

        Liked by 1 person

Leave a reply to houstonphotojourney Cancel reply

Previous Post
Next Post

Discover more from Moushmi Radhanpara

Subscribe now to keep reading and get access to the full archive.

Continue reading