Why do You Hide From Me?

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I have my own doubts and reluctance when it comes to this poetry, if at all it can be called one. I wrote it almost a year ago, and have never come about to posting it. So now you know how much I was hesitant to share this with anyone. It has taken me a year and another three days to have the courage to share this with you or anyone for that matter.

So now before I change my mind, I am going to hit publish, and let you guys judge me..

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Where are you hiding away from me?

Why, dear love, why do you hide from me?

 

Are you hiding beneath the sky?

The sky that is dark and gloomy

The empty face

That is raining down on me?

 

Are you hiding betwixt the stars?

The stars, magnificent and twinkling

A beautiful constellation

That is shining upon me?

 

Are you hiding behind the full moon?

A moon, calm and comforting

The complete façade

That is spreading its borrowed light on me?

 

Are you hiding among the woods?

The woods and trees that seem all lonely

The empty silence

That is lumbering down on me?

Are you hiding behind the sun?

The sun that is bright and radiant

The blinding fury

That is scorching down on me?

 

Are you hiding behind the mountains?

The mountains that are far and away

The scratchy road

That is soaring upon me?

 

Are you hiding among the seas and oceans?

The oceans that are waving in

The tumultuous uproar

That is really trembling me?

 

Are you hiding among the winds?

The winds, rapid and raw

A soft touch

That is truly whistling down on me?

 

In vain you hide from me

Why, dear love, why do you hide from me?

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Thank you once again, if you have come this far!! Did not expect you to.

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40 responses to “Why do You Hide From Me?”

  1. ~H@rdip~ Avatar
    ~H@rdip~

    Wow it’s amazing 👌👌👌 very well penned 👍😊

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so much.

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  2. radhikasreflection Avatar

    Why did you deny us from enjoying this beautiful poem for so long Moushmi? Genuinely good dear. You should write poetry more often:)

    Liked by 4 people

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so very much Radhika. I am too flattered now 😀

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  3. hellolauren528 Avatar
    hellolauren528

    Well done! Don’t ever be afraid to share!

    Liked by 4 people

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so much.

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  4. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

    It is such a lovely poem. Why would not publish it before

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks a lot. I think since something was hidden from me, I tried hiding this poem from everyone!!

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  5. Thought for Change Avatar
    Thought for Change

    This is amazing dear. I hope you find him soon.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks a lot 🙂

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  6. Rekha Sahay Avatar

    Beautiful poem dear!!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so much.

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      1. Rekha Sahay Avatar

        welcome !!

        Liked by 3 people

  7. Bushra's Lifestyle Blog Avatar

    Very deep and beautiful poem. Please share this on our fb group for bloggers. If you haven’t joined it come join us on

    https://www.facebook.com/groups/bloggershangoutplace/

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks a lot dear.

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  8. Adi Avatar

    This is wonderful…✨✨

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Aditi..

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  9. Megala Avatar

    Beautifully written poem ! Why did you hide this from us? 🙂

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Oh thank you so much Megala.

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  10. Shreya Vohra Avatar

    Hahah, we often have inhibitions about our work, and sharing them feels like such a challenge!
    But this was a lovely piece, dearest Moushmi!🌸✨

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so, sooo much Shreya, but I request please don’t be modest and keep my heart. I still have my doubts about this one.

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      1. Shreya Vohra Avatar

        Oh, that’s okay. Perhaps because it is something different than usual. But I did enjoy it, it has a sort of freshness (maybe because you described all these natural bodies, the sun and the stars) and the imagery is wonderful😊

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Thanks once again. (I am blushing now :-D)

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