Ailing Fighter!

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I turn the pages from the past,

Memories from which have still not run fast.

I write and edit,

And see how my own words misfit.

I wonder if ‘I’ really wrote that?

And rate it again for being it so tad.

And yet you call me a writer,

While all I deem myself is an ailing fighter!

 


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33 responses to “Ailing Fighter!”

  1. valerie-the-escapist Avatar

    Lovely 👍

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you.

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  2. Tanusri sen Avatar

    Very nice

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you 🙂

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  3. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

    The thoughts from the past that troubles our mind, that urge to express, when inked on paper by you makes the words look beautiful and we admire that and label you as a writer with a beautiful or may be an aberrant soul

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Hah! I was wondering how would you turn this around me!
      And you sure did.
      Aberrant? Well, I accept that 😀
      Thanks for the wonderful comment that you leave here, which is probably always better than my writing 😉

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      1. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

        My comment is only an inspiration led by your beautiful poetry. For my words are nothing but shadows of your beautiful verses. You wrote it beautifully. If I haven’t told you before – I love your writing and your thoughts. Stay charming 😊

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Thanks so much Shantanu!
        You ave always been an inspiration.
        Love and smiles to you 🙂

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      3. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

        Feeling is absolutely mutual. And right back to you 🌸🌸

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  4. Thought for Change Avatar

    Nice

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      🙂

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  5. iScriblr Avatar

    This is so deep and heartfelt!❤️

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so very much Richa.

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  6. Kumar Harsh Avatar

    This resonates with me at so many levels. Wonderful writing fighter!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much.

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  7. kalyansparks Avatar

    Well written moush

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Kalyan.

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  8. Upen Reddy Avatar

    Turning the pages from the past always makes oneself to express better. A writer’s mind is also troubled with layers of thoughts.

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Well said, thanks so much for reading.

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      1. Upen Reddy Avatar

        Welcome:)

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  9. Infinite Living Avatar

    A life warrior who writes too is a courageous one! 🙂

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much dear.
      You have always been very supportive.

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      1. Infinite Living Avatar

        You are very welcome.

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  10. ilonapulianauskaite Avatar
    ilonapulianauskaite

    You are rally goo at writing🤗

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    1. ilonapulianauskaite Avatar
      ilonapulianauskaite

      *you are really good at writing❤️

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      1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Thanks so much..

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