Half Moon!

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न जाने क्यों,

मुझे उस ढलती शाम के

अधूरे चाँद से अलग ही प्यार है.

*

Somehow,

I brace a different kind of love for that half moon,

advancing the evening.

 

PS:I know I could have never come up with an English translation, sounding almost the same as the Hindi version; still worth a try may be?

 


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41 responses to “Half Moon!”

  1. Mona Avatar

    Hindi mai Bahout hi badhiya lga…😊😊

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so much mona. Such a loooooong time!!
      Hope all’s well?

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      1. Mona Avatar

        Yeah… not inspired enough to write anything. Will be back soon…Hopefully!

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Yes, please! I hoping that too 🙂

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  2. triarianiindah Avatar

    Nice moon
    😀😀

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks.

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  3. Thought for Change Avatar

    I love that too. And yeah the English version can’t do justice to the Hindi one

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much.

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  4. parikhit dutta Avatar
    parikhit dutta

    Indeed, the beauty of words remains locked in the language it is originally penned in.

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much dear.

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  5. buddy71 Avatar

    “Do not know why,

    Me that morrow evening

    There is only love from the unfinished moon.”

    this was how google translated. i love the last line.

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Buddy, but I am pretty sure no one who understand the language is going to like the Google translation . 😀

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  6. iScriblr Avatar

    So beautiful!❤️

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you 🙂

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  7. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

    I love the feeling of this poem – beautifully done ❤️

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much Shantanu. I love the feel that feeling too 😉

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      1. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

        😊🌸👍

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  8. Abhay Avatar

    But today is The Full Moon😉

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      There my friend, lies the irony!! 😀

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      1. Abhay Avatar

        Irony and sarcasm, greatest art of Writing

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Absolutely 😉

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  9. Baffledmum Avatar

    Thank you for trying to translate, sounds good to me… I can’t read Hindi so am grateful… 👍

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Hi, thanks a lot for stopping by and leaving behind an honest comment. Would love to see you here again.

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  10. Sifar Avatar

    Wah!! Stunning pic!! And mesmerising lines! I loved the hindi lines and skipped the english one as that would have diluted the taste! See you write so well in hindi too!! Should more!!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks, I know you are being too generous with your appreciation here.
      I do write in Hindi, not so much, but every once in a while, and it remains hidden in a journal, or a hidden folder on my screen. Only recently have I posted a couple or two posts here.

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      1. Sifar Avatar

        No i mean it when i say it! I like it a lot….i think i should steal that hidden journal now 😈 if dont want that to happen then post more 😅

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Hahaha my friend, no one, I repeat no one has ever been able to even look at that journal, let alone steal a few glance of that page. You stand the thinnest chance of stealing it :-p

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      3. Sifar Avatar

        Oh that makes me even more ‘oh so curious’ now!! 🤩🤩 i will take the help of my friend – the coffee hater – to disappear it from under your nose!! 😈

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      4. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Just try!

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      5. Sifar Avatar

        First i have to get mr coffee hater freed from your spell to get the job done! 😁
        He is spending a lot of time with you now 🥺

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      6. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Oh how novice of you, yo really think anyone specially mr. Coffee hater can be freed from my spell!! Woe, do you even know me 😀 :-p

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      7. Sifar Avatar

        Haha…i know some tricks to distract you from afar… like a nice cup of coffee, a big chocolate, some dance music and a book! And then i will break the spell and free mr coffee hater 😈

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      8. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Lol! You are such a novice :-p

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      9. Sifar Avatar

        Haha….that we will get to know of very soon 😈

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