The Amassing Vengeance.

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He strolled into the room

Silence screaming behind him,

She garnered herself on the couch

Terror and throes screaming from inside her.

 

The stress, the tension surfacing

The unknown reconciling,

His anger transpiring

Her calm deescalating.

 

And in a sap all was lost

A yank through her ruffled hair,

An irate haul on her head

Her body forcefully standing.

 

A jab, a thump, a knock

And there she was,

Rocking herself on the floor

Alone, withstanding.

 

The relentless pleads had not sufficed

And so came the determined decision,

With anger and terror, the dwellers of heart

She thwacked between his legs, a brawny art.

 

And there he lay, beside her

On the self made land, wrenching in pain,

Two pairs of red gory eyes, glaring at each other

Heavy, strong breaths, petrifying the other.

 

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46 responses to “The Amassing Vengeance.”

  1. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

    Wow, you write so beautifully. The raw emotions were so heartfelt – it shook me and the vivid picture you drew is going to linger for a while – keep firing your pen – stay beautiful

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      thanks so much Shantanu. You have really been very kind with you words here.

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      1. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

        My absolute pleasure, Moushmi

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  2. myexpressionofthoughtsblog Avatar

    strong and uphold feelings shared. emotions that are hurt and looking for comfort.

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much for reading.

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  3. Deboshree Avatar

    What is the word I need – intense! You have woven a powerful image that is going to linger for a long time…

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so very much Deboshree. Deeply appreciated.

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  4. Fab Writings Avatar

    Truly, your writing has been so evolved. Intense and scenes were switching to and fro in mind while reading it. Great job!

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much.

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  5. iScriblr Avatar

    Absolutely brilliant!👏👏

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Richa.

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  6. Baffledmum Avatar

    So intense! Powerful vocabulary emphasising the raw emotion of this battle…

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much dear. I am glad you like this.

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  7. Sneha Ganesh Avatar

    Wow. I love this

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Sneha.

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  8. Winnie Avatar

    Wow! Profoundly and beautifully penned!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Winnie.

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      1. Winnie Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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  9. mitadaur Avatar

    Oh so painful.

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      I know it is, thanks for stopping by.

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  10. Through my eyes😊 Avatar

    Powerful one.. 👌

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks.

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