Treacherous Love.

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He promised me he’d forever be mine

Giving me no reason to think, to my face he’d lie,

He sealed his promise with a chaste kiss

Deceiving me into believing for an eternal bliss.

 

He didn’t leave me of his own accord

Only- death did us sorrowfully apart,

But in him, I lost my partner in crime

And with him, I lost my reason to smile.

 

Now, when old age has befriended me

With ‘lack’ of all kinds seeping in,

Teeth, taste, ability to walk; hear

Wanting, patiently for my heart to tear.

 

Time and loneliness has started eating me alive

With my body withered, no one cares for my hidden vice,

And despite the lineage of children and grandchildren

No one deciphers the secluded nausea, building in.

 


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40 responses to “Treacherous Love.”

  1. Mona Avatar

    This was tragic to read but beautifully written Moushmi. 🙂

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Mona. I hope I don’t dissapoint

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  2. Adi Avatar

    This is so heartfelt and I can empathise and relate to this feeling somehow! You wrote it so beautifully my dear🙌

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Aditiiii, hugs to you 😀

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  3. The Accidental Writer Avatar

    Beautiful 👌🏼☺️

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you.

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  4. Sifar Avatar

    You have captured that sense of loss so well!! And then the unavoidable old age and loneliness!! It scares me!! 😰

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      It scares everyone, I guess.

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      1. Sifar Avatar

        Yes i think so too 😣 …

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  5. Yasmin Khan Avatar

    Poignantly beautiful 💔

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much dear.

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  6. ESP Avatar

    the secluded nausea..good one

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much.

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  7. tomhudson Avatar
    tomhudson

    This is so powerful and so beautiful as well. It is a reality a lot of people must face. I can relate to this in a very emotional way.

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Hi Tom, thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts here, I truly appreciate it.
      I hope you have a good day ahead.

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  8. Infinite Living Avatar

    Beautiful!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you.

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