Treacherous Love.

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He promised me he’d forever be mine

Giving me no reason to think, to my face he’d lie,

He sealed his promise with a chaste kiss

Deceiving me into believing for an eternal bliss.

 

He didn’t leave me of his own accord

Only- death did us sorrowfully apart,

But in him, I lost my partner in crime

And with him, I lost my reason to smile.

 

Now, when old age has befriended me

With ‘lack’ of all kinds seeping in,

Teeth, taste, ability to walk; hear

Wanting, patiently for my heart to tear.

 

Time and loneliness has started eating me alive

With my body withered, no one cares for my hidden vice,

And despite the lineage of children and grandchildren

No one deciphers the secluded nausea, building in.

 


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40 responses to “Treacherous Love.”

  1. flyhiee official Avatar

    This is really touching.
    Keep up the good work.

    https://www.flyhiee.com/reflection/its-my-choice/

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  2. samyak singh Avatar

    Getting old sucks if it’s just the seclusion around me.😐

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      I agree 😦

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  3. Deboshree Avatar

    This is almost too painful. Can’t stand the thought of such treachery 😦

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      I know, right!

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  4. Winnie Avatar

    This is so deep and beautifully penned!

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Winnie.

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      1. Winnie Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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  5. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

    This is so so beautifully written – heart wrenching and poignant – we sometimes lose our best friend forever – such is life

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks, and such life is ‘unfair’ 😦

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      1. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

        True that

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  6. rajanisingh885721172 Avatar

    Fabulous post

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks.

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      1. rajanisingh885721172 Avatar

        Please read my first post

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Can you please attach the link here.

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  7. rajanisingh885721172 Avatar

    Please read my first post

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  8. Megala Avatar

    Yes, it is such an awful agony of old age.

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      I agree, thanks for reading.

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  9. iScriblr Avatar

    Poignant and deep!❤️

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks.

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  10. Kranti Avatar

    This is so touching and beautifully penned!!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      thanks so much dear, you have been too supportive these days 🙂
      I truly appreciate this/

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      1. Kranti Avatar

        It truly is my pleasure 😊

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