Cacoethes.

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Todays evening sun

Reminds me of him…

A ‘Him’- lonely, vibrant and distant.

When I bask myself in its glory

To brighten my inner joys,

To enliven my hurting hunger.

I draw him to me, in

The dusk of my glooming room

And sit atop

Mouth on mouth,

Body on body,

Craving, thirsting-

The mundane murmers soaring, sigh

The rumblings

The thrusting

The grieving agony-

The passion, the breathing

Slowly moving.

And then the night steals him,

The romantic notions of sun,

The patronising night, and his stealth.

And all I am left with,

Is a gentle throbbing,

A longing lust,

And my eyes dreaming.

Ps: Please don’t give up on me. I’ll catch up with you guys very soon.


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41 responses to “Cacoethes.”

  1. simplywendi Avatar

    so well done!

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    1. Yadu Nagar Avatar

      Waah ๐Ÿ‘

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      1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        ๐Ÿ˜€

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    2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks.

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      1. simplywendi Avatar

        my pleasure. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. ESP Avatar

    A longing lust in dreamy eyes..enticing

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks ESP. ๐Ÿ˜€

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  3. samyak singh Avatar

    Wondering what would a painting look like based on this post.๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      You have made me thinking, but I am sure, definitely better than the poetry ๐Ÿ˜‰

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    2. Akhila Avatar

      That’s an interesting thought

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      1. samyak singh Avatar

        Everyone should try it.๐Ÿ˜

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      2. Akhila Avatar

        Yup, I am not at all a painter, still there is a boost to go

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      3. samyak singh Avatar

        Good !Try it.๐Ÿ˜

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      4. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Akhila, did I land in your spam>

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      5. Akhila Avatar

        Nope..you are at the right place

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  4. iScriblr Avatar

    I love it! Kudos!โค๏ธ

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Richa.

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  5. Deboshree Avatar

    Stunning visual imagery! Loved your choice of subject too.

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much Deboshree, your are just ebbing too kind.

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      1. Deboshree Avatar

        Nope, only honest ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

    When the heart yearns for love, it finds every reason to find him in the wilderness or otherwise – a beautiful poem

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much Shantanu.

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      1. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

        My absolute pleasure

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  7. Adi Avatar

    A wonderful read! Well done๐Ÿ™Œ

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    1. multipotentialitethoughtswriter Avatar

      This is so beautifully written!! I wish I had your talent. Xx

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      1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Thanks so much.

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    2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Aditiiiii

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  8. soniadogra Avatar

    Lovely composition

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much.

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  9. Kranti Avatar

    Wow, wonderfully penned!!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much Kranti.

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      1. Kranti Avatar

        My pleasure! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  10. vishalbheeroo Avatar

    I cannot give up on you with such sensational words firing the imagination and heartbeats thrumming the soul ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Oh, thanks so much Vishal, you make me blush ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      1. vishalbheeroo Avatar

        Such a pleasure and blushing at the picture of you blushing Moushmi ๐Ÿ™‚

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Hahaha,

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      3. vishalbheeroo Avatar

        ๐Ÿ’•

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