Suppressed Vehemence.

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You said it was love,

And I believed in you and called it love-

I fused in you

And lost all I had.

 

I loved you with all I had

And you deceived me with all you could

All I claimed was, you to love me too

And all you did was betrayed me with all my feelings too.

 

But what could I have expected,

I wanted sunshine and rains and winters

I wanted all-

But unknowingly I entered a silent brawl.

 

I wronged myself, in believing in you

For I think I demanded sunshine off the morning dew,

It’s not your fault, as rains only provide thunder

And a snowfall in scorching summers would only be a wonder.

 


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43 responses to “Suppressed Vehemence.”

  1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

    Wow deep words of a lover who gave her all but was rejected nevertheless. Apt picture of suppressed vehemence. Great poem, Moushmi.

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much Kamal.

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      1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

        Welcome Moushmi.

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  2. Rekha Sahay Avatar

    True , honest and pure love can’t be wrong/ fault , betrayal is wrong.
    Nice expression.

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks dear.

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  3. Deboshree Avatar

    “It’s not your fault, as rains only provide thunder
    And a snowfall in scorching summers would only be a wonder.”

    Such beauty in these words ❤

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Deboshree.

      Like

  4. The V Pub Avatar

    There’s no more feeling of isolation as to when a person who you thought was in love with you, was not. A beautiful entry!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      I agree with you, that is a pathetic feeling.
      Thanks for the read 🙂

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  5. tomhudson Avatar
    tomhudson

    I really enjoy all of your poems, Moushmi. Your words are words of beauty.

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much Tom.

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  6. Akhila Avatar

    Are you alright my girl?

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      I am absolutely Perfect, Akhila. 🙂

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  7. Carolyn Page Avatar

    Powerful, Moushmi… Great written expression…

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much,

      Like

  8. soniadogra Avatar

    Great read. Though I wish it wasn’t so heart breaking.

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      I know it is sad. Thanks for reading.

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  9. Anupriya Kumari Avatar

    The end….. Beautiful!! ❤

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Anupriya,

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  10. Ramyani Bhattacharya Avatar
    Ramyani Bhattacharya

    Amazing and very deep. I particularly love the rhythm☺️

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much.

      Like

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