सूरज से गुफ्तगू #1

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तुम रोज जो छुप-छुप के
मुझे यु देखा करते हो,
सिर्फ नफरत ही है ज़ेहन में
या थोड़ी मोहब्बत भी किया करते हो?

PS: I refrain to translate them in English! I don’t think I can justify it!

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60 responses to “सूरज से गुफ्तगू #1”

  1. ESP Avatar
    ESP

    Nice. good that you didnt translate. “now that you stalk me everyday, are you planning to kill or is this some kind of love”

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Hahaha Did google translate this? Or was it the result of your mind’s efforts?

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      1. ESP Avatar
        ESP

        My efforts of course, I choose to be wrong but not get dictated by Google, which lacks beautiful eyes.

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Hahaha How do you know Google doesn’t have beautiful eyes!

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      3. ESP Avatar
        ESP

        Google has lens and even if it had beautiful eyes it wont stand a chance against the ones that does guftgu with the sun.

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      4. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Hahaha! Come on! Stop… You make me giggle 😀

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      5. ESP Avatar
        ESP

        oh..I didnt know you were writing a test, or wait..are you with the tree?

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      6. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Hahaha the tests are over! Now go figure :-p

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      7. ESP Avatar
        ESP

        haha figured, but have you?
        tell me 3 good things about the tree

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      8. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        I’ll give you one and it makes up for everything: it exists only when I am waiting for Godot 😉

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      9. ESP Avatar
        ESP

        haha, good one!

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  2. Sakshi Avatar
    Sakshi

    This is so beautiful ….I feel an element gets lost in translation ……..I struggle with it always

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Sakshi, I do agree, translations have never been my thing!

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      1. Sakshi Avatar
        Sakshi

        My pleasure 😊

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    iScriblr

    ❤️❤️❤️

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      🙂

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  4. Yasmin Khan Avatar
    Yasmin Khan

    चुपके देखने वाले मोहब्बत ही करते ❤️

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Aye haye!!!

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  5. preksha 🌼 Avatar
    preksha 🌼

    Aye! ❤️

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      🙂

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    Infinite Living

    Beautiful!

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so much.

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  7. Shereen Mir Avatar
    Shereen Mir

    So much said in so little. Waah!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you very much.

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    paeansunplugged

    चाँद से तो सब गुफ्तगू करते हैं, सूरज से गुफ्तगूू…क्या बात! बहुत खूब!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much. That is the concept behind this thought. I often feel, that the moon is over-romanticised and the sun is not! So I chose to romanticise him 😉

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      1. paeansunplugged Avatar
        paeansunplugged

        I agree, the moon is over-romanticised! Romancing the sun sounds a good idea! 😉
        You are so welcome.

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  10. Muntazir Avatar
    Muntazir

    Ahaa! Lovely

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you.

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