सूरज से गुफ्तगू #2

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आज फिर छुप गया था वो मुझसे
न जाने कम्बखत कितनी कहानिया छुपा रहा था मुझसे.

कुछ और शिकायते सूरज से : सूरज से गुफ्तगू #1


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52 responses to “सूरज से गुफ्तगू #2”

  1. my valiant soul Avatar

    Loved it.❤️

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much.

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  2. Sakshi Avatar

    Beautiful

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      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Sakshi.

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      1. Sakshi Avatar

        My pleasure

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  3. Samyak Singh Avatar

    Yeah clouds are hovering up above now!😃

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      😀

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  4. The Typewriter Avatar

    Wow.. so beautifully put.. 😇👌🏼💕

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much 🙂

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      1. The Typewriter Avatar

        Pleasure was mine dear.. 😊💕

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  5. Ameet Kothari Avatar

    Wah… but shouldn’t it be छुप instead of चुप

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you for bringing it to my notice.

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  6. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

    Hahaha nice 👌 poem, Moushmi

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks.

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      1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

        Welcome.

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  7. The V Pub Avatar

    The sun is hiding where I live too. 🙂

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      😀

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  8. ESP Avatar

    Lovely, stories that would have revealed? or probably hiding from you, the blog writer, who would grill for new stories even if none existed

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      No stories exist in sun? Are…..

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      1. ESP Avatar

        are kya? you tell us..

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Nah.. let it be..

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      3. ESP Avatar

        I “liked” the comment and then realized I dont like it. Un”liking” wont have portrayed how I feel..so this.

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      4. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Oh, so sorry! You tell me what I am supposed to do now! I will do it right away..

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      5. ESP Avatar

        you will? throw the drink on the tree and blink your eyes 😀

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      6. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Oh come on that’s just rude yaar..

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      7. ESP Avatar

        Sigh, I had to try..

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      8. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Hahaha

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  9. soniadogra Avatar

    Captured beautifully and worded perfectly!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much 🙂

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  10. Kranti Avatar

    Perfect words to depict the pic Moushmi. They complement each other beautifully!!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks so much Kranti. You are a gem!

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      1. Kranti Avatar

        😊💖🤗

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