सूरज से गुफ्तगू #6

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चलो जाओ, नहीं करनी तुमसे कोई मुलाकात
तुम नहीं चाहते तो नहीं करनी तुमसे कोई बात
दूर-दूर ही अच्छे हो
चाँद क बिना ही पुरे हो.
शायद इसी बात का गुर्रर है
चांदनी से पहले जो तुमसे मोहब्बत का इकरार किया है.
हमने तो कोई पर्दा न रखा था
पर तुम्हारे सुरूर का ताप ही गहरा था.
चल आज से सब बदल जायेगा
तेरी जगह चाँद का नाम लिया जायेगा
आज से रात को ही सपने  देखेंगे
सौंदर्य की जगह चांदनी को दे देंगे
बोल अगर है तुजे मंजूर
या फिर है तुजे मेरी ही मोहब्बत कबूल?

PS: However cliche this may sound anyone saying Kabool, kabool, kabool will not be entertained.

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35 responses to “सूरज से गुफ्तगू #6”

  1. Samyak Singh Avatar

    Yeah chanda mama is the best. Our only saviour from all the disdains!💕

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Hahaha is that so?

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      1. Samyak Singh Avatar

        Yeah he’s always up there and you can adore him while having an in-depth conversation as well. 😃

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  2. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

    Nice poem on Chanda mama, Moushmi 👍 👍👍 👍

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Kamal.

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      1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

        Welcome Moushmi.

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  3. Jonathan Caswell Avatar

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    CUTE REDHEAD…WHAT DOES “KABOOL” MEAN?

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Kabool means ‘to agree’ mostly used as ‘I do’ used in christian weddings.

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      1. Jonathan Caswell Avatar

        AH…!

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  4. Jonathan Caswell Avatar

    I perceive…that I cannot translate your posts????

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      I am sorry, i write in Hindi and English. But some i just don’t see worth translating in fear of losing the essesnce.

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      1. Jonathan Caswell Avatar

        You know…I have added translation to my blog..test mine out and see if it works?

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  5. iScriblr Avatar

    ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      😀

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  6. buddy71 Avatar

    for us non Indian people, what does “kabool” mean?

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Sorry. Kabool is a term used when you mean to say you agree. But more often it used in some wedding rituals just as the Christians say ‘I do’ in weddings.

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      1. buddy71 Avatar

        I see. Thank you

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  7. Vivek Upadhayay Avatar

    अच्छा लिखा है ।

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you.

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  8. Kranti Avatar

    Beautifully penned! Loved it!!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks a lot Kranti.

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      1. Kranti Avatar

        Always my pleasure 😊

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  9. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

    Wow – this is absolutely gorgeous – the teasing words, the love, the emotions and you – a deadly combination – anyone will say Kabul Hai three times 🌸😊❤️

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Hahaha thanks Shantanu.

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      1. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

        My absolute pleasure 🌸😊

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  10. ESP Avatar

    lovely, the guft-gu is turning into a story now, so what did we learn from this episode?
    the one-sided loving and hopeful protagonist says, ‘enough is enough’ and seems determined to move on to easier moonlit zones.
    but no, the ending is a u-turn suspense. instead of moving on, a question is posed to Suraj. There is hope!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Hahaha yeah, hopelessly hopeful 😀

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