The Sea

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Moushmi Radhanpara

19.08.2019

Poetry has been a consistent part of my life, first reading and then writing. Though if someone would have said that I could try writing poems, a year back, I would have rolled my eyes and said, “Yeah, right!” Not that I have become very confident of my pieces, but I have come as far as trying to share them and be judged.

So, judge away a small poem that has been accepted for publication by Indian Periodical:

The Sea

Do share with me what you think about this. It is always amazing to hear from you, and helpful to hear an honest opinion.

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41 responses to “The Sea”

buddy71

19.08.2019

they made a very good choice.
congrats on being selected

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  19.08.2019
  
  Thanks Buddy.
  
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Deeksha Pathak

19.08.2019

Congratulations!!

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  19.08.2019
  
  Thank you..
  
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calmkate

19.08.2019

lovely thought, congratulations … why is the name Dennis Gabot on it?

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  19.08.2019
  
  The thought is by Dennis Gabot, the poem is in the link.
  
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  1. calmkate
    
    19.08.2019
    
    ouch missed that, coming back to read it!
    
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  2. Moushmi Radhanpara
    
    19.08.2019
    
    Haha sure, no worries.
    
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  3. calmkate
    
    19.08.2019
    
    It’s really beautiful and a little sad … love your use of colour 🙂
    
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  4. Moushmi Radhanpara
    
    19.08.2019
    
    Thank you so much dear.♥️
    
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  5. calmkate
    
    19.08.2019
    
    my pleasure 🙂
    
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paeansunplugged

19.08.2019

It is a lovely melancholy piece and I love the last line putting up a fight! Congratulations Moushmi. ❤️

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  23.08.2019
  
  Thank you so much dear. I am glad you liked it.
  
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  1. paeansunplugged
    
    23.08.2019
    
    You are welcome, Mou.
    
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boundlessblessingsblog

19.08.2019

Yes absolutely true and I agree with these beautiful poetic splendor, Moushmi 👍👍 👍, it is not easy for everyone to understand a poet.

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  23.08.2019
  
  Thank you so much kamal.
  
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  1. boundlessblessingsblog
    
    23.08.2019
    
    Welcome Moushmi.
    
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Samyak Singh

19.08.2019

Indeed it took a while to have a fix on your splendid poetry. Sums up the whole life of a sea until it veils it’s beauty under the dark only to rise and shine the next morning.
Don’t know whether I could sense the meaning right! But I love reading them..😊💙

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  23.08.2019
  
  Thank you so much Samyak. I think the perception holds different from reader to reader. I loved your take on this.
  
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ESP

20.08.2019

Congratulations and well deserved. I loved the poem and I kept thinking of colors and canvases, waiting for the sea to appear. The writing has the angst, the introspection, the helplessness but never a sense of defeat that pervades most of your writing.

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  23.08.2019
  
  Thank you ESP. That defeat, I hope is only in my writings and not in reality.
  
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  1. ESP
    
    25.08.2019
    
    I hope so too M, I know you are not the type who would be comfortable in defeat, be it reality or writing, sometimes there is not much difference between the two.
    
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iScriblr

20.08.2019

Congratulations! 🙂

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  23.08.2019
  
  Thanks richa.
  
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Yasmin Khan

21.08.2019

Brilliant piece of poetry❤️
I especially loved the last line👏

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  23.08.2019
  
  Thank you so much yasmin ji.
  
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zoeena2000

21.08.2019

You messaged me on my main page like 2 years ago. I kind of dropped this, but now I’m gonna bring back my blog. What ever this is. Congrats!!!

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