Perfectly Imperfect

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Perfectly Imperfect

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Moushmi Radhanpara

14.04.2017

Black or brown, it doesn’t matter, they were beautiful. I couldn’t make out the colour of her eyes but I know they were stunning, mesmerising, for sure, as I am still lost in that glimpse of her gaze. They seemed innocent, yet they had a story. What did they want to say? What was she hiding?

Her eyes were big, bold and yet they seemed shy and diffident. What was wrong? I did not know, though I wanted to. She had looked at me with those mysterious eyes and had left me dazed. The look was striking with the arched eyebrows raised high above on her forehead. Was she confused or rather questioning?

I am pretty sure she could have scared off anyone with those deep eyes; well she could have startled herself too with those meaningful eyes.

They weren’t perfect, neither the eyes nor the eyebrows but they were beautiful to me, perfectly imperfect, just for me.

PS: A fiction.

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49 responses to “Perfectly Imperfect”

Mehul Singla

14.04.2017

Beautiful post. Loved it😊😊 keep writing😊👍

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  16.04.2017
  
  Thank you so much dear. I appreciate you comments.
  
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shehannemoore

14.04.2017

Imperfect perfect or perfect imperfect always makes for lovely words.

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  16.04.2017
  
  Thank you so much dear. They do make a lovely pair.
  
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  1. shehannemoore
    
    16.04.2017
    
    Indeed xxxxx
    
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  2. Moushmi Radhanpara
    
    17.04.2017
    
    🙂
    
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chaos-xd

14.04.2017

Eyes of course can say a million things just with a few blinks couldn’t it. Love the mysterious vibe you brought out throughout the post and you’ve nailed the conclusion in style!

“perfectly imperfect, just for me.” 👌

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  16.04.2017
  
  Thank you so much dear.
  You just made my day with your comment. I am just glad you liked it and seemed fit to give it some time.
  Much love:-)
  
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  1. chaos-xd
    
    16.04.2017
    
    It’s been a pleasure! 😏
    Stay blessed ✌
    
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Jeni G.J

14.04.2017

I’m still lost in that glimpse of her gaze, she had looked at me with mysterious eyes and left me dazed. She could have scared off anyone with deep eyes….beautiful..felt like I was reading a book.👌 it was perfect, to me.

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  16.04.2017
  
  WOW!!
  Tooo glad. Thank you so very much for this great appreciation. I am ecstatic.
  
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  1. Jeni G.J
    
    16.04.2017
    
    My pleasure.
    
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kalyansparks

14.04.2017

Oh my god who is she😫😫..I am scared..her deep eyes are soo dark ..I can’t enter those thought I had a torch of courage.They are more than what you think..what are they moushmi??

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  16.04.2017
  
  They are a lot than any one can decipher. But what are they, it is on you to decide. I don’t want to let it go.
  But whatever it is I don’t think you ought to be scared.
  
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  1. kalyansparks
    
    16.04.2017
    
    I know..I am just kidding re
    
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  2. Moushmi Radhanpara
    
    16.04.2017
    
    I got to know that 😀 Just teasing.
    
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  3. kalyansparks
    
    16.04.2017
    
    Hmmm…good Girl
    
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eliza rudolf

14.04.2017

Wow…😮😮😮

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  16.04.2017
  
  Thank you dear for your comment.
  I think you kind of liked it.
  
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  1. eliza rudolf
    
    16.04.2017
    
    Yr welcome..😊😙🙂
    
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Lana_SHON

14.04.2017

Imperfect perfect deep eyes look very mysterious. But I like these eyes.

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  16.04.2017
  
  Thank you for appreciating this small piece.
  I am glad you like it. 🙂
  
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kiranmag

14.04.2017

Wow !! that’s very beautiful dear
Jaw dropping I would say

Her eyes speak
About what’s in her mind
About the things she hides
In the deep corners of her mind
If you gaze deep into her eyes
Her eyes are the starting point
Of journey to her soul

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  16.04.2017
  
  You just created a lovely poetry out of a simple concept that I showed.
  You really have a knack of words.
  
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  1. kiranmag
    
    17.04.2017
    
    Thank you so much dear Moushmi 😊…just random thoughts
    
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  2. Moushmi Radhanpara
    
    17.04.2017
    
    They were more defined than you think.
    
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thegirlonthego08

15.04.2017

How amazing! ❤

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  16.04.2017
  
  Thanks a lot for your views. 🙂
  
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Sifar

15.04.2017

Eyes!!…they say a thousand words!! And convey multitude of emotions! Captivating always!! Nicely captured….👍 It also made me recall some wonderful lines on eyes from a song:

Aankhein dekhin to mein dekhte reh gaya,
Jaam do aur donon hi do aatisha!
Aankhein ya maikade ke yeh do baab hein,
Aankhein inko kahoon ya kahoon khawaab hein!
Aankhein neechin huin to haya ban gayin,
Aankhein unchi huin to dua ban gayin!
Aankhein uth kar jhukin to ada ban gayin,
Aankhein jhuk kar uthi to qaza ban gayin!
Aankhein jin mein qaid aasman-o- zameen,
Nargisi nargisi, surmayi surmayi!
Aafreen Aafreen, Aafreen Aafreen!!

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1. Moushmi Radhanpara
  
  16.04.2017
  
  Yes they do speak a lot, a reflection of your inside which isn’t visible to all.
  Also thanks for reminding this wonderful song!
  
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