I Cannot Breathe.

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Open the door

Open the windows.

Let the thinnest air in,

For I cannot breathe in.

 

Let me feel the breeze

Let me cherish the wind.

Allow me to swallow the air,

For I cannot breathe in.

 

Unclasp your fingers from

Around my neck.

Loosen your hold

From around my hips,

For I cannot breathe in.

 

It is raining outside.

The clouds passing by

The lightening that just went by.

I can see the shower

Trickling down the trees.

The mud dancing down the roads.

The strong winds

Blowing away the leaves.

And yet, I cannot breathe in.


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44 responses to “I Cannot Breathe.”

  1. shalini Avatar

    Lovely words girl… You are amazing

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Shalini, I am glad you feel this way,.

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      1. shalini Avatar

        Girl I have always felt that about you

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      2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
        Moushmi Radhanpara

        Oh, I am flattered 🙂

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  2. rugby843 Avatar

    Loved this

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Hey, thank you so much. I am so happy you like it.

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  3. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

    How beautiful. I can feel t. Amazing words

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you Shantanu. I am glad you cherish the feelings too.

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      1. Shantanu Baruah Avatar

        I surely do 😊🌸

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  4. Ben Aqiba Avatar

    Moushmi that is one wonderful poem 🙂
    Thank you for sharing

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks a lot Ben. I am so happy you like it.

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  5. Megala Avatar

    Wonderful lines.

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Megala.

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  6. Lavanya Avatar

    It’s beautiful 👌

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you so much for stopping by and giving it a read. I am glad you liked it.

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  7. kalyansparks Avatar

    Heyy..nice one yaa…the word framing and all are soo simple but the meaning is deep…

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Kalyan. I am glad you like it.

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  8. radhikasreflection Avatar

    Beautiful lines Moushumi!

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks Radhika..

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  9. myexpressionofthoughtsblog Avatar

    Lovely words !! Sometimes suffocation is so strong from inside that it’s not able to break the emotions you are facing and no matter how much efforts you make but cannot breathe

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thanks dear. You grasped the exact emotions I wanted to portray.

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  10. iScriblr Avatar

    Lovely!❤

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    1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar
      Moushmi Radhanpara

      Thank you dear 🙂

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